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Truth or Lie? by ~loveversehate:iconloveversehate:

Categories Literature > Poetry > Romantic > Other Romance > Open




Unbidden yet the card arrives
While by the sea she weeps once more
As waves unfurl and turn to froth
Amongst the empty, endless shore
His hands now trace the perfect heart
So delicate and red in hue
Plays host to only secrets still--
A sign of love: false or true?
Observe this paper envelope
Pink and taintless yet so free--
A harbourer of mysteries
Concealed within for none to see
Unclasping now the sealing heart
She slides out a loving note
Her eyes then brim with tears of joy
Regarding what her sender wrote
"I love you -- you're not alone
I hope you feel this too
Let our love not be unknown
As I sent this card to you."
©2007-2009 ~loveversehate
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Author's Comments

What love can sometimes be like.

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~ilytigger Jan 6, 2007, 1:22:31 PM
If I were to read this one...over and over again...and think about it in more than one way...from multiple perspectives...i think it would make me cry.

--
Acrophobia- Fear of heights.
Agraphobia- Fear of sexual abuse
Anuptaphobia- Fear of staying single.
Athazagoraphobia- Fear of being forgotton or ignored or forgetting.
Atychiphobia- Fear of failure.
Autophobia- Fear of being alone or of oneself.
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~loveversehate Jan 6, 2007, 1:24:26 PM
I'm sorry, I din't want that. I really am sorry.

--
~Love's Only Hatred~
:iconilytigger:
~ilytigger Jan 6, 2007, 1:33:47 PM
oh no no no.the good kind of tears.tears are healing,hun.

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Acrophobia- Fear of heights.
Agraphobia- Fear of sexual abuse
Anuptaphobia- Fear of staying single.
Athazagoraphobia- Fear of being forgotton or ignored or forgetting.
Atychiphobia- Fear of failure.
Autophobia- Fear of being alone or of oneself.
Hidden by Owner
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~loveversehate Jan 6, 2007, 4:34:14 PM
Tears are healing...? I...never knew.

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~Love's Only Hatred~
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~xhxixdxdxexnx Jan 6, 2007, 6:20:03 PM
They are
If I didn't cry so easily I would probably go insane...
If that makes any sense

--
Never let them take you alive. Rawr
:iconilytigger:
~ilytigger Jan 6, 2007, 8:17:17 PM
well..its true.....cuz like...when you first start crying you feel like shit but usually when you stop you either start again or you're sitting there pretty calmly.

I read that somewhere...that tears are healing.I dont recall as to where though. anyway i thought about it...then the next time i cried i realized that it was true.

--
Acrophobia- Fear of heights.
Agraphobia- Fear of sexual abuse
Anuptaphobia- Fear of staying single.
Athazagoraphobia- Fear of being forgotton or ignored or forgetting.
Atychiphobia- Fear of failure.
Autophobia- Fear of being alone or of oneself.
Hidden by Owner
:iconloveversehate:
~loveversehate Jan 6, 2007, 8:30:42 PM
I...might...try...I was never supposed to cry...

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~Love's Only Hatred~
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